Mumkin Hota Agar….
Khwab saare unke poore kar deti….
Har muskaan ko unke Hothon Pe dhar deti…
Mumkin hota agar Zindagi ko bina aansu ke jeena…
To unke haar takleef ko apne naam kar deti…..
Koshish se kehti apni saari taqat laga de…..
jeet se kehti bas thoda sa haath bada de….
mumkin hota agar..
Har jung ko jeetna…
To unhe haar par hasna sikha deti…
Dard ne bhi haarkar keh diya…
“Mujhse itna pyaar mat karo”…
Kabhi to khushi ke ehsaas ko…
mehsus kar liya karo…
Mumkin hota agar…
Unka..Dard ko Bhulaana..
To unki mulaqat mein Khushi se karwa deti…
Jo tabaahi Ka jashn Khule Aam raha hai…
Jo barbadi ko hi apni manzil bana baitha hai…
unhe zindagi ka maksadh kaise samjha deti…
mumkin hota agar waqt ko badalna..
to unke har zillat ko Main Tareef mein badal deti…..
Mumkin Hota Agar….
Mumkin Hota agar….!!!!
it is a nice dear
keep on making such good thing s
dear
Comment by sriraj — February 21, 2008 @ 4:22 pm
Who say i m good? Who says i m bad ?
Who say he is Boy? Who says She is Girl?
But i say dont say i word that has no meaning !
hey that was my best effort but eventually i land up in Bullsheet
i know How it feels when you write such dirty poems and even How you Strive to get all the courage you need to tell it to somebody else.
I m the real admire of yours as i know how difficult it is .Keep it up !
hey i know you r the best but i dont exprss it !!you know i m fool. but the one thing you dont know i m full of you. Dont think too much its like my poem To hard to imagine.
From someone Who irritates you always
—————-R
Comment by R — February 23, 2008 @ 12:40 pm
Good blog but needs to be updated with more article stuff …
Comment by Puneet — February 24, 2008 @ 10:44 am
It was gud .. but dont have something which make it a last long .. just the usual way of writing which a new comer has … still gud keep it up ..
Comment by Sanjay — February 28, 2008 @ 12:25 pm
Its really a nice efforts. Keep up the good work.
Wah! Wah!!
Comment by vikas — February 29, 2008 @ 12:28 pm
it is good but can be improved. Keep it up
Comment by figaar — April 30, 2008 @ 4:05 pm
Wow .. its too good .. i found it very nice and sweet .. i dont know whether need to improve of what .. bcas i think writing is all about thoughts and if you do changes just because other like it .. then it will be story not a poem …
I loved your poem .. and I would like to read more from you .. if you have ur old collection you can mail me at rushabh.lathia@gmail.com
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