Sawaal
Shikayat Zindagi se hoti kyun Hai…
Sab Kuch Hote hue bhi Har cheez ki kami Kyun Hai….
Majburi bhi khud jaanti hai..
ki woh kismat ke bina adhuri hai…
Phir ye bebasi hamesha roti kyun hai…..
Aksar mere zehen mein,
Ek sawaal utha karta hai….
Khuda ki Ibaadat ko Zindagi kahan jaata hai…
Phir kyun Is tofhe ko Majburi ke haathon Dekar…
Usse Ek uljhaya Hua sawaal Banaya jaata hai….
Har taraf Nafrat Ka zeher bhara kyun hai….
is jahaan se mohabbat ka Nishaan Mita kyun hai…
Majburi bhi khud jaanti hai..
ki woh kismat ke bina adhuri hai…
Phir ye bebasi hamesha roti kyun hai…..
Chalo mana ki Zarurat Mohabbat se badkar hai…
Kuch Paana Khone se zyaada khubsurat hai…
Par zindagi mein sab kuch mile ye zaruri toh nahi…
Zarurat ke bina jeena shayad ho..
Par mohabbat k bina jeena
Mumkin hi nahi….
Taqdeer Is kadar waqt Ka ghulam Kyun hai..
Kuch Paakar usse Khona hi hai..
To woh khushi humhe milti kyun hai…
Majburi bhi khud jaanti hai..
ki woh kismat ke bina adhuri hai…
Phir ye bebasi hamesha roti kyun hai…..?????
Oh My Goodness !! Priti,, those are magical words came out of you !! Its a Beautiful Shayari I have ever heard !! And I can see your feelings coming out of your soul in this Shayari !!,, Let me tell you again,, its a beauty !!!!
I liked the last stanza’s first line - Taqdeer Is kadar waqt ka ghulam kyu hain !!
Its amazing hun,, its top of the world line.
and above all, only priti the sweetheart could write such an lovely poem !!
You are the best !! kool ? should be superkewl !! hehe
Love always
Brij !
Comment by Brijesh — February 21, 2008 @ 1:10 pm
hey really cool blog..i liked this poem very much..
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Comment by adhish — April 3, 2008 @ 10:53 pm
hiii pritii >>. ur shayaris >> n ur kavita r xcellent >>> they r master piece >>
Comment by nikin — August 12, 2008 @ 4:32 pm
Hi! I’m great fan of PRETTY(Priti) since years. She is not just a writer or poet, she is an excellent singer too and above all she is an angel (such great species can’t come under homo sapiens). I know this angel personally and i ask you all who ever reading her life touching poems and shayaris, please meet her personally and you will find great INSPIRATION sent by GOD for us.
MAY GOD BLESS YOU DEAR WITH LOTS OF HAPPINESS, HEALTH, COMFORTS, SUCCESS & GUYS !!!
Comment by bharat shitole — September 17, 2008 @ 12:02 pm
hi beautiful priti,
i have never seen u but still can see ur beautiful soul in ur beautiful words.GOD blessed u with excellent brain and beautiful soul,u know combo ka jamana hai aur u r perfect.would luv to see u one day.cheers:)
Comment by anu — September 17, 2008 @ 1:19 pm
hey
Nice to read ur own……..which r coming from the deep heart……keep writing like these cute words for us and all those who can realy in love with the word……as one can express everything…..
bye tc…..love ya…….
JaY
Comment by Jay — September 28, 2008 @ 1:04 pm